Love it, L. Vago. Especially the tension at the end of Sirena agreeing to what Zoe wanted through an argument of "we need this." Other people -- other people like you and me. YOU have to sacrifice for the good of the whole. That's an appealing argument sometimes, but others, it's just as corrosive as other stories we tell ourselves and others. Cant wait to read the next scene
I'm glad you are reading that into it. It's a tension I want Sirena to grapple with, though to be honest I'm not quite sure it plays out as much later in the story. We'll see!
Love it, L. Vago. Especially the tension at the end of Sirena agreeing to what Zoe wanted through an argument of "we need this." Other people -- other people like you and me. YOU have to sacrifice for the good of the whole. That's an appealing argument sometimes, but others, it's just as corrosive as other stories we tell ourselves and others. Cant wait to read the next scene
I'm glad you are reading that into it. It's a tension I want Sirena to grapple with, though to be honest I'm not quite sure it plays out as much later in the story. We'll see!